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Friday, October 16, 2009

Flash Fiction Friday #8: "Captured"

She raised her head, weakly, as she floated back to consciousness. Agony flooded through every pore and she inhaled for a scream. The hard core of rubber in her mouth prevented even that elemental release.

Stretched, pinioned with chained shackles at each extremity, splayed in a horrible reminiscence of “Vitruvian Man”, she hung exhausted in the prison of her pain.

And yet....

Wetness ran down her legs, her traitor body responding to the sensations awakened inside her. Images skirled through her mind, how he had taken her to the deepest depths and the most dizzying heights.

She wanted more...

(This, though a bit darker than my usual tastes, is my entry for Spanky and Tiggs's Flash Fiction Friday Challenge #8: 100 words on the photo shown above. Want to play too? Then stop by and check out the guidelines.) 

-- PB


Gray said...

Oh my, that was intense. Definitely darker but well written.

The Temptress said...

I agree with Gray. Darker but intense! Nice work. :-)

The Panserbjørne said...

Gray, Temptress: Thanks! I'm glad it was to your liking. It made me a bit uneasy to write because the severe pain / BDSM thing really isn't my cup of tea, but hey...gotta try new and different things sometimes.

-- PB

Not My Original Vows said...

Great story...intense but I liked it.


The Panserbjørne said...

Katia: Thanks for saying so! And thanks for dropping by, too. Your own contribution was interesting as well.

-- PB

Spanky said...

Darkly delicious. I liked it.

The Panserbjørne said...

Spanky: Hm. This dark piece seems to be resonating rather strongly with a lot of people. I wonder what that says about us?

Thanks for commenting!

-- PB

Luna Mauvaise said...

Umhmmm...I like it when you go dark. But then, that *is* my cup of tea. ;) Lovely effort, PB!


The Panserbjørne said...

Oh, I figured *you'd* enjoy it at the very least. And hey, making one lovely lass happy can't be all bad. :) Thanks!

-- PB

Sexie Sadie~ said...

That might be some of the most deliciously dark 100 words ever strung together!


The Panserbjørne said...

Sadie: This one seems to have struck a chord with a lot of people for some reason. I guess there's a demand for the darker stuff....hmm.

Anyhow, thanks for stopping by and for the nice words!

-- PB