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Friday, September 17, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 9-17-10: "Deep Rising"

 (Source image: "The Kiss" by Vitaly S Alexius; click for larger size)


“You're what?” she said very slowly.

“I am a water elemental, milady,” came the reply -- low, sibilant, rich and inviting.

She shook her head. “I don't believe in stuff like that.”

He chuckled appreciatively, ripples dancing, spreading outward from where he stood in the lake. “Then let me show you,” he said.

Slowly, she waded forward, almost without volition, the water lapping at her thighs now, her eyes dreaming and clouded. He flowed forward and up, rising in a vortex, gyring skyward in torrents, then cascading and settling over her. She gasped at the sensations, splashed with pure heat, feeling him slide into her, liquid gone suddenly very rigid indeed, thrusting, unutterably slick and hot. Fire and water met in crescendo at her mouth, bubbles dancing over her skin as he covered her, teasing and exciting every inch of her body.

“Yes...you are,” she sighed.


Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 110-154 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...splashed with pure heat..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

The following people are participating this week. Go check out their take on this FFF, won't you, and thank 'em for playing along.

Drenchxoxo:  http://thedrenchedone.blogspot.com  (Drench is new this week; go say welcome!)
Soren:  http://amorousdays.blogspot.com
Rozewolf:  http://wordwytch.wordpress.com
Laura:  http://romanceandbondage.blogspot.com
Spring Flower:  http://agirlsgottahaveoptions.blogspot.com
Elisabeth:  http://writingsondomesticbliss.wordpress.com
Lexi:  http://lex-ploits.blogspot.com
Big Geek:  http://getting-a-grip.blogspot.com
Trazuredpet:  http://hisslaveahavanaimah.blogspot.com  (Trazure is also new this week; go say welcome to her as well!) 
Advizor:  http://advizortoall.blogspot.com 
Liley Brown:  http://kristonia0everbell.wordpress.com  (Liley is still another newcomer; please say hello!) 
Bilinda:  http://fantasiesofanunofficialconcubine.blogspot.com
Slow Burn:  http://burnslowly-slowburn.blogspot.com
Chocolate Puss:  http://chocolatepuss.tumblr.com 

Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. 

-- PB

13 comments:

Drenchxoxo said...

Love it! Simply magical.

I am really digging everyones take on the picture.

Chocolate Puss said...

I love it, too!

~CP

Gray said...

Oh now that was cute! The water elemental part.. the rest was damn sexy!:)

slowburn said...

I like the mythological take! Almost mystical, I dare say.

Naughty Lexi said...

Why must you always make me want things I can't have? Because now I want sex with a water elemental. You and CP's entries this week have driven me into fantasy land. Now all the men will be saying, "Why do water elementals get all the women?" ;) As usual, a wonderful entry and a sexy one as well.

Spring Flower said...

That was brilliant & sexy! Wouldn't it be awesome to be touched that way? :)

R said...

A water elemental for me too, please! ; )

That was magical, indeed...

elisabeth said...

Perhaps there are enough of us interested to develop this water elemental into a reality? ;) LOVE your take on this. My entry is FINALLY up!

Mystique said...

*sighs blissfully*
Sex... magic... water...
What more could a girl ask for~

Cheeky Minx said...

Oh my...

I suspect such a mystical yet visceral and material encounter would transform a girl forever.

Seriously sexy, PB... x

The Panserbjørne said...

Drench: I think we had some great entries this week. Glad you liked this one!

Puss: Thanks for saying so! You and I had a similar approach, but different enough to make both well worth reading (he said boastfully). :)

Gray: Thank you so much! Nice to see you again after such a long hiatus. What HAVE you been doing all this time, hmm?

Slowburn: I do like a touch of the magical and mystical wherever I can manage it in my daily life. It tends to find its way into my writings as well. Thanks!

Lexi: Oh, now, who's to say you can't have it? "There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio", and all that. Seriously, though, I'm glad you liked it so much.

Spring Flower: I'm actually not sure whether I would prefer to be her, or him. I think it would be awesome to be either one in this magical pairing. What does that say about the scenario, eh?

R.: This seems to have struck a chord with a lot of you ladies. I guess I need to write more tales featuring water elementals! :) Glad you enjoyed it.

Elisabeth: Yes, it does seem to have gone over rather well, doesn't it? Thanks for dropping by and I'm happy you liked what you read.

Mystique: The complete package, eh? Sometimes you CAN get what you want, it seems. Drop in anytime. :)

Minx: Oh, certainly. I'm sure she wouldn't want anything else once she'd had him. Who's to say he didn't take her with him when he returned, hmm? Glad you liked it.

-- PB

Transylvanian Miss said...

Hey PB,

Sorry this is so late I was away on a very interesting weekend :)

I love your take on this picture very mmmmm inducing... I had thought of using that angle and then didn't and now I'm glad cos you have worked it beautifully :)

always,
Bilinda

The Panserbjørne said...

Bilinda: Oh? Do tell, I'd like to hear what was so interesting. :) Glad you liked the tale, though!

-- PB