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Friday, April 30, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 4-30-10: "Rush Hour"


Streaks of crimson, of white, of amber. From her vantage point on the balcony she watched the traffic stream by below, faint susurrus of whooshings, engine roars dopplering past.

Under the confining coat, her breasts drew tight in anticipation. Her nipples crinkled, hard and pointed. She licked her lips, wondering: “Do I dare? Is my body good enough?”

She sipped air, tasted the evening. Decided yes.

The coat slid to the balcony floor. Night air ran cool fingers over her superheated skin. Below, a chorus of horns brayed approval.


Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 84-94 words. Nobody's checking word counts, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

The following people are participating this week. Check out their take on this FFF.

Gray:  http://mygrayline.blogspot.com
Nilla:  http://vanillamom.wordpress.com
Snow:  http://snow9.wordpress.com
Soren:  http://amorousdays.blogspot.com
Curvaceous Dee:  http://curvaceousdee.com
Katia:  http://katiaswritings.blogspot.com
Lila:  http://que-sinverguenza.blogspot.com
Sephani Paige:  http://sephanipaige.wordpress.com
Diable Incarne:  http://conningdevil.blogspot.com
Luna Mauvaise:  http://lunamauvaise.blogspot.com 
We also had a late arrival who joined in after Friday:
Netsfan44:  http://netsfan44eroticstories.blogspot.com/

Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see used in a future challenge, send it my way. 

-- PB

11 comments:

nilla said...

I read *everyone* this week! Yay! I loved your highly evocative words, mostly "dopplering" but you get bonus points for "susurrus"!!!

I loved it. Loved it. I think you and sephi are tied for my favorites this week!

as always, thanks for being the host with the most! GREAT pic.
nilla

Gray said...

What a great take on this picture, I love the idea of standing outside on the balcony and being that free. Hmmm *eyes her balcony*

Happy FFF!

lila said...

guh, gorgeous vocabulary!! love it.

Not My Original Vows said...

I love the part of sipping the air and tasting the evening~
Thanks for hosting!
Katia

Spring Flower said...

You have such a way with words... Beautiful, as always. Sexy, as always! xo

The Panserbjørne said...

Nilla: I do love to play with language. I'm happy it evoked that response from you. Thanks!

Gray: Maybe you should try it. No doubt there are tons of balconies in your town. :)

Lila: Thanks! I appreciate it. Enjoyed yours too, quite a bit.

Katia: That was one of my favorite bits too. Glad you liked!

Spring Flower: I do try my very best. Thanks for saying so! :)

-- PB

Cheeky Minx said...

You capture the sultry, sexy heat both inside and out with such delicious economy.

I, too, love her daring...

Curvaceous Dee said...

Your word choices made me happy :)

xx Dee

The Panserbjørne said...

Minx: I had a feeling you might. "Daring" is you all over, I think. Wouldn't be surprised to hear you've done something like this, one day. :)

Dee: Thank you! I do pick them carefully for the most part. I like these short exercises for that reason.

-- PB

Fantasia Lillith ( Fanny) said...

I love that she still has a hat on!
lovely perspective.

The Panserbjørne said...

Fantasia: You know, I just realized I forgot to mention the hat. Gah! Glad you liked the pic, though.

-- PB