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Friday, April 2, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 4-2-10: "Six Short Words"

She fought, biting and clawing, then finally using every ounce of strength to resist that inexorable pull. Tendons stretched and muscles strained as her head was forced closer and closer to his lap. From her: soft effortful grunts, short whimpers. From him: mostly dead silence.

“Open your mouth, goddammit,” he hissed, wrenching her up and towards him again. “It's not going to bite you.”

“But what if I bite it?” she snarled, twisting, turning.

The pull stopped, his arm went rigid. His cock, however, did just the opposite. She smiled grimly.

Your challenge for today was to use the picture above (supplied this week by Diable Incarne -- thanks, DI!) and write a flash fiction of 88 to 94 words. Nobody's checking word counts, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

The following people are participating this week. Why not go check out their take on this FFF?

Luna Mauvaise:
Curvaceous Dee:
Spring Flower:
Lila:   (everybody please stop by and welcome Lila to FFF, this is her first time joining us!)
Diable Incarne:

Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! 

-- PB


Anonymous said...

Loved it! So short, but conveyed SO much info.

lila said...

HA! i love this. wonderfully written.

Not My Original Vows said...

Who won this time? WEG
Nice, PB!

Anonymous said...

Just a small bite... then you kiss to make it better. ;-)

Curvaceous Dee said...

*nibbles delicately*

xx Dee

Gray said...

This was great!! hahah

Happy Easter Panser.:)

Cheeky Minx said...

Priceless, PB!

And I have no doubt she managed to get the rest of him back in line with his arm in no time at all... ;)

The Panserbjørne said...

Poppet: I do find these to be interesting exercise for my writing muscles sometimes. This was one of those. Glad you liked.

Lila: I enjoyed yours too! Welcome aboard and I hope we'll be seeing lots more from you.

Katia: I think she was the winner, definitely. Happy you liked this one!

Spring Flower: Unless you're being really forced, like she was, in which case you chomp like a motherfucker. Ouch. I hurt just typing that. But I like your idea better. :)

Dee: Oo, somebody else has the right idea. What a shame he chose to try forcing her, eh?

Gray: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Drop by anytime. :)

Minx: Maybe...if she would allow any other interactions. I was trying to convey a sense that she was being forced, which I'm never very comfortable with. Glad you liked it all the same!

-- PB