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Friday, June 24, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday 6-24-11: "Audience Participation"

(Image provided by Lexi, original source and photographer unknown)
"Ready?"

"Oh hell yes. I'm soaked. On three?"

"One, two, THREE!"

We stopped in the middle of the crosswalk, dropping our coats. She bent over and waggled her ass at me; I clapped my hands on her tiny flank, spread her, and slammed in. She threw back her head and moaned, immediately bouncing back against me, bucking frantically, trying to get me deeper. Heads turned. I heard gasps of shock, disgusted murmurs, and not a few ribald comments.

I knew time was short, so I really went for it, pounding her hard and fast, feeling her wetness coating my balls as they slapped against her violated pussy. She was never quiet, but now she was emitting banshee shrieks. I felt myself shooting towards the edge and brought down my hand in a sharp smack on her ass as I finished, roaring with atavistic glee. By her frantic spasms and her loudest howl yet, she wasn't far behind.

Slowly, I pulled out, drinking in the scandalized glares like fine wine. Rattle and hum of conversation, but still no cops. I scanned the crowd, and gestured at her, still bent over and panting like a dog.

"So who's next?"


Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 100-200 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...rattle and hum..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

Special Bonus Director's Commentary Track:


Lexi sent me this pic months ago but it just didn't catch my interest until this week. It wouldn't be fair to say I pick these pics based solely on my interest in them or my perceived ability to write something interesting, but sometimes that's not far from the truth. This one I just didn't feel like using until I had some kind of idea in mind ahead of time on how I was going to play it. 


This week I finally got something when I looked at it again. Sex in public is one thing, but what about turning it into performance art? Something where not just the participants had fun, but the audience got to join in as well? It gave a nice twist to something that...well, something that probably isn't too likely to happen in the first place. Or maybe it's just an excuse for an orgy scene. I think the world would be a lot better off with more orgies. In public, even.

Please note that I am no longer collecting the participants list. If you are playing along this week, please leave your link below using the widget. It will appear in the text of the post itself, not in the comments, so everyone that's playing will be listed here. This frees me from having to chase people down to find out if they're playing or update the Friday post several times for late entries. Your cooperation is appreciated.

In any case, the participants list is below. Go check them out, and thanks to all who played along.



Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. Thanks to Lexi for providing this week's photo.


-- PB

8 comments:

Naughty Lexi said...

I knew I was in for a good one when I read the title, even without reading anything else, and the rest didn't disappoint. It was good until the end, at which point it became delicious. Maybe I'm just a sick monkey. Definitely the story I would have written, had I written this story, but I didn't, so you wrote it instead so I didn't have to and could spend all my time getting wet ;)

France said...

I'm way too germaphobe for that kinda participation in a group event. :p

Happy Friday :)

Advizor54 said...

The public fuck is dangerous enough, but to invite others to join in is a great twist. A great take on the picture.

Naughty Lexi said...

Oh, and now I think about it, this has almost a flashmob-type feel, what with the suddenly stopping and beginning in the middle of the street. Now that's the only type of flashmob I want anything to do with ;)

Word said...

Ah, a great read! Love the bit at the end with audience participation.

The Temptress said...

Very hot! And I have to say I love a bit of erotica that actually teaches me a new word (atavistic.) Thanks!

The Panserbjørne said...

Lexi: First off, don't feel bad about me not particularly liking the pic. If I only put stuff in here that was about my particular kink or my particular set of interests, this wouldn't be very interesting. Nice to challenge me once in a while. I'm glad you liked it (and no, I don't think you're a sick monkey -- or if you are, I am too). And wouldn't it be awesome to see more flash mobs like this? Hell yeah.

France: Well, maybe you can just watch from the sidelines then. I count that as participation too. Exhibitionists don't have any fun unless there are voyeurs involved. :)

Advizor: I'm glad so many people seem to have liked it. This could be seen as an incitement to gang rape if it weren't for the fact that I tried hard to make clear she was really getting off on it.

Wordwytch: Lots of people seem to like it, which is making me happy. Thanks!

Temptress: I used to apologize for my extensive vocabulary before I realized how ridiculous that was. I do still get asked to explain words sometimes but I don't apologize any more for being well read. :)

-- PB

TemptingSweets99 said...

Me, me! I wanna be next! ;-) Awesome story.