“There,” she said, dropping him with a thud. “This is a good spot. Isolated. Nobody will hear the screaming all the way out here.”
He scrabbled in the dirt, arms and legs still pinioned by bands of force, his eyes mad. Tiny sounds trickled out around the corners of the energy gag in his mouth.
“What? The gag? Oh, I'm sorry,” she said, not sounding it in the least. She flicked her hand absently towards his face and the gag shimmered and dissolved. But the shining bands around his arms and legs remained.
He spoke fast, the words tumbling out. “Come on, Vortexa. It was just a measly little bank heist and nobody got hurt anyway. You can't kill me for something like that.”
Her blonde eyebrows shot up. “Kill? I never said anything about killing you.” She knelt and ran her gauntlet up his thigh to his crotch. Electricity flared and rippled from her fingertips. He was instantly, painfully hard, and moaned in disbelief at the raging lust that swept through him.
“I'm in a lot of trouble here, aren't I?” he whimpered.
“Could be,” she agreed, and reached for his zipper...
(Check out the new FFF FAQ, linked from the button above!
Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of exactly 200 words. Nobody's checking word counts, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).
The following people are participating this week. Why not go check out their take on this FFF?
Sephani Paige: http://sephanipaige.wordpress.com
Nilla: http://vanillamom.wordpress.com/
Snow: http://snow9.wordpress.com/
Curvaceous Dee: http://curvaceousdee.com/
Check back here on Monday for the next challenge. I will be out of town this week so the story post on Friday the 19th will not have a list of the participants, but the following Monday (the 22nd) I will provide a list of everyone who played along!
-- PB
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9 comments:
But such good trouble it could be. Awesome piece for FFF!:)
Gray: Thanks! I tend to agree -- there's trouble, and then there's TROUBLE. I think he's in the latter, happy sort. Glad you liked it!
-- PB
Wonderfully done! You and Dee each took the futuristic track...and so much fun from each!
nilla
...absolutely delighted...
I just finished mine! bit late but the migraines have been plaguing me of late :P enjoy!
Oh to be a bank robber in her capable hands!
Hehehee... like the humour in that one.
Man, I like your imagination.
I don't mean to be a pain, but that is not 200 words ;-) LOL
Vortexa - what a great name! And I love that our two stories seem to share the same 'verse :)
xx Dee
Ha, ha! Love it, love her, love the way she thinks...
(I'm with Dee - fabulous name.)
Nilla: I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for the nice comments.
Fantasia: I do like to keep things silly once in a while. :) Happy you liked!
Spring Flower: I rely on the word count tool in OpenOffice to determine word counts. If it's off a bit, then, well, I can't be faulted for that. :) Still, I'm delighted you liked this one.
Dee: I actually spent more time trying to think up a decent name than I did writing the entry itself. Happy you liked it, and the tale!
Minx: I'm delighted it was to your taste as well. And happy you liked the name, which I actually agonized over for far too damn long. Haha.
-- PB
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