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Friday, March 19, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 3-19-10: "Saw it Coming a Mile Away"


Pain and darkness.

Pain and darkness and chills. Cold sweat running down her skin.

She raised her head weakly and mewled in agony as the motion set her aflame. A thousand barbs stabbed her from a thousand directions. Sobbing softly, trying not to move too much, she opened her eyes, wincing as a spotlight stabbed her anew, and looked down at the source of her torment...

Barbed wire. Splaying her, restricting her. Wrapping her body from head to toe, snaking its steel caress around her fragile limbs, digging in sharply whenever she shifted too much in any direction.

A television on the wall nearby flickered and came to life. A doll's face looked at her, emptily.

“Hello, Susan,” the voice said. “I want to play a game.

“The wire that shrouds you is no less sharp than the self-pity that afflicts you. Night after night you have denied your dark urges, till your misery was so complete you could barely even function. I now give you the chance to redeem yourself.

“The barbs of your restraints dig into you from head to toe, save in one place. The wires across your cunt are thicker, smoother, and barb-free. I want you to use them now. If you can make yourself cum in five minutes, you will be freed. If not, the wires will tighten and cut you to pieces.

“Make your choice, Susan.”

And the television went dead.

Whimpering, Susan did as the voice had directed, feeling a raw, dirty pleasure grow inside her as she rubbed her clit roughly against the restraining wire. Barbs dug deep on her breasts, her thighs, her legs, her arms, blood now trickling down her skin. The shreds of pain only increased the wetness between her legs. Dimly, she realized it would be all too easy to fulfill the voice's requirement.

(Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 100-300 words. Nobody's checking word counts, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

Since I am out of town this week, I don't have a participant list yet, but check back here on Sunday for the next challenge plus a list of all the participants from this week's challenge!

Happy FFF, all.)

-- PB


Anonymous said...

It seems we took the same approach: torture/pain vs pleasure. And had the same movie in mind!!

I like your twisted mind. :)

Gray said...

Very nice piece to go with the picture! Happy FFF!

Cheeky Minx said...

Ouch! And oooooooo.....

Luna Mauvaise said...

Five minutes?? I could cum several times in five minutes. You know, if my life depended on it. ;)

Happy FFF!

Anonymous said...

Oh it friday already? I've been trying to sleep off the sickness that has invaded ever since my St. Patties night adventure with an ex....still fevered and no FFF to show :( sorry! I'll be back in the saddle next week!

nilla said...

Oh that was...scary and delicious. Thanks for an interesting pic, and Your own great contribution!

mine is at


The Panserbjørne said...

Spring Flower: It was the first movie that jumped to mind, yes -- even though I've never seen any of 'em, just bits and pieces. Thanks for playing!

Gray: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Now when are you going to join the ranks, eh? :)

Cheeky Minx: Yeah, I tried to get a bit of both into this one. Hope you liked the results!

Luna: Oh, don't lie, you could do it even without threats of death or dismemberment. Haha. Thanks for playing!

Nilla: I do want to keep things interesting here. Thanks for your own contribution!

-- PB

Anonymous said...

Love seeing these glimpses of your darker side. ;)

Fantasia (Fanny) Lillith said...

Pain - just isn't my thing. It's an instant turn off for me. So, this didn't "do it" for me as much of your other stories have. Having said that - well done. Nicely written.

Wonder if we can see a dark side without pain?

By the way - the first collaboration story was up (previous post) if you want to see what can come of it. Let me know if you change your mind.

If you go to the bottom it links back to Smokedawg’s site with the Author commentary - that is a fun read.

The Panserbjørne said...

Marianne: So do a lot of people, apparently, from comments I've received on this and other darker tales. Makes me wonder what's driving you out there. Glad you liked this one!

Fantasia: I have one or two tales on the burner involving a loss of control and succumbing to darker urges but without necessarily being painful. I may get to them soon; we'll see. Re: the collaboration -- I'll check it out! Need to catch up on what I missed this past week and a half.

-- PB