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Friday, October 14, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday 10-14-11: "Worth a Thousand Fantasies"

(Source image: "Framed" by Marcus J Ranum)


The instructor adjusted the frame, then stepped back, satisfied. “There,” he said. “Thirty minutes.”

Lyla settled back on her heels. Now that the time was actually here, she searched for a hint of her earlier panic, but it was nowhere to be found. Serene as a Hindu cow, she sat there, an object before their gazes.

The pose she'd chosen allowed her to glance around without disturbing her arrangement. She saw marked admiration in every glance, and caught some of that excitement herself. Her breasts drew tight and her nipples stood tall. Between her thighs, the insistent pulse mounted high.

“I love art class,” she thought.


Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 80-112 words. Additionally, I asked that you include the emotion of "calm" somewhere in the piece.

Nobody's checking word counts, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

Special Bonus Director's Commentary Track:

Not much to say this week, other than to say that I think the young lady in this photo is just lovely. I want to run my hands over that lovely smooth skin, caress those sweet curves. I love her purple hair, too, and wish I'd found some way to work that into the story. 

If you are playing along this week, please leave your link below using the widget. It will appear in the text of the post itself, not in the comments, so everyone that's playing will be listed here. This frees me from having to chase people down to find out if they're playing or update the Friday post several times for late entries. Your cooperation is appreciated.

In any case, the participants list is below. Go check them out, and thanks to all who played along.



Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. 

-- PB

7 comments:

wordwytch said...

Love your take on the pic. I thought about art class and diverged a little.

Jack and Jill said...

Very cool interpretation of the picture, and a great means of conveying calm without using the word. I agree that the model in this picture is lovely, and I like the purple in her hair. I tried to mention that in my own story, but that particular line was one of the first casualties when I found myself trimming to fit the word limit.

Great job!

-Jack

nilla said...

i lost the purple hair in my edit too,Jack! Panser, great pic and it's great to be back to FFF...been a busy few months for me.

Lovely pic, and lovely words to accompany it!

nilla
(using my swirlednilla wordpress account for my FFF!)

David said...

Serene as a hindu cow = calm - - all of these references to art class models makes me regret my engineering line of study, nice story, thanks.

Advizor54 said...

It's a great take!

Sorry I'm so late today, work got in the way.

Topaz said...

I was up, but late adding my name to your list because, well, same excuse as Advizor.

I see you and I had similar genre, but I like the process of getting to the finished art - nicely done!

TemptingSweets99 said...

Art class IS fun!