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Friday, April 29, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday 4-29-11: "A Stolen Kiss is Sweetest"

(Source: Untitled image by Will Santillo)

God, why did I let myself be dragged into this? Liz thought. She scanned the room, looking for someone, anyone, who had two brain cells to rub together. These people are like a flock of chattering magpies. Lots of noise, not a damn thing to say. And I'm too hot and this wine is terrible and that music is crap and god, I hate this.

And then her eyes fell on Adele, and Adele turned and stared back, pinned Liz to the wall with that searing gaze, ignited her from crown to toes. And Adele smiled a long slow smile, and mouthed one word: “Bathroom”.

And Liz stumbled robotically towards the bathroom, heart hammering, breath already coming hard and fast. How does she do this to me every single time? she wondered.

And Adele followed, the lock clicking behind her. She advanced, bearing Liz back, Liz's mouth opening to accept Adele's hot tongue, feeling Adele's hands ripping her blouse open, wanting Adele's nipping teeth on her hard nipples, Adele's fingers buried in her pussy, wanting Adele, all of her.

Adele pulled back, grinning. “My lovely, lovely Liz,” she purred. “I have something for you.”

And Liz's eyes went wide as Adele opened her slacks to reveal the biggest strap-on Liz had ever seen. She shuddered, and spread her legs. “Oh yes, baby,” she moaned. “Now.”

“Right now,” Adele agreed, and thrust hard.



Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 120-240 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...hard and fast..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

Special Bonus Director's Commentary Track:

I'm always curious about lesbian and gay relationships. I've read a lot of stuff that indicates one of the pair usually plays a dominant role, "playing the guy" if you will. Adele and Liz are my attempt to play out that kind of dynamic. I kind of wish I had more room to develop these two, and may do so later on. I picture Liz as the academic, intellectual type, possibly a scholar or an art gallery owner, overtly feminine but hiding her sexual appetite from the world. Adele I see as head of her own business firm, the kind of woman who dresses in business suits and wears her hair short, looking like something out of a Patrick Nagel print, knowing that people call her "butch" and not giving a damn about it. I imagine that she met Liz at her gallery and immediately moved in, knowing that Liz wanted someone to guide and teach her, finding to her surprise that Liz was enthusiastic and very unlike the drab personality she presented to the world.

In any case, I found this picture delightful, a moment of pure passion between two people who are obviously very much into each other. Lust? Love? Infatuation? Or just a power exchange? It seemed it could be interpreted lots of different ways. I think it's all of those, for these two. And I think it's hot as hell. I hope you enjoyed the pic and challenge this week.

Please note that I am no longer collecting the participants list. If you are playing along this week, please leave your link below using the widget. It will appear in the text of the post itself, not in the comments, so everyone that's playing will be listed here. This frees me from having to chase people down to find out if they're playing or update the Friday post several times for late entries. Your cooperation is appreciated.

In any case, the participants list is below. Go check them out, and thanks to all who played along.



Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. 

-- PB

8 comments:

Naughty Lexi said...

I think it's safe to say that most, if not all, relationships have a dominant partner. Not in the D/s sense, but in the sense you're talking about. But be careful saying that someone is playing the man around the lesbians I know ;) In fact, I'm friends with a number of straight couples where the man is definitely not the dominant partner, and I met one delightful lesbian couple where the extremely butch lesbian was totally cowed by the girlier-than-hell pixie. That was actually kind of funny, and they both knew it too; she was about a foot shorter, must have weighed 90 pounds dripping wet, and yet I wouldn't have gone up against her in a fight. She would have painted my ass pink.

None of that was about your entry though, was it? I've been to parties like that, and wished I had someone to make that suggestion. Sexy as the photo is, you manage to gild that lily ;)

Lady Seduction said...

Some of my best relationships with both men and women have involved the ability for my partner and I to alternate the submissive/dominant roles. This picture and story definitely bring to mind some excellent fantasies!

HEDONE said...

Hot bathroom sex with a stranger is one way to liven up a boring party :-)

-H

The Panserbjørne said...

Lexi: Good points, all. As for not having someone to make that suggestion -- well, hell, next time you go to a party, take Sveta with you. Seems like she's getting bolder in that respect (I'm thinking of a recent theater incident, for example).

Lady S.: I think those relationships are definitely the most fun -- when things are constantly shifting and changing, the relationship is, I think, stronger, and definitely more interesting and less vulnerable to becoming stale. Glad you liked this!

HEDONE: Oh no, they aren't strangers. They're definitely a couple. Adele dragged Liz along to the party when she didn't really want to go. I feel like I failed if I didn't make it clear they're a pair. Oh well...glad you liked it all the same.

-- PB

Heaven said...

Since writing stories are not my strong suit, I am just going to read all the links here.

Thanks ~

France said...

This could qualify as a surprise party? ;) Love it!!

Word said...

A little late on commenting, but I did enjoy your take on this. The 'too much wine' sort of set the mood. Amazing what people will do. :)

The Panserbjørne said...

Heaven: That will do nicely as well if you like. Nobody HAS to play along, only if you want to. Glad you like the stories anyway.

France: Well, not exactly. I get the impression they may have done stuff like this before, just not with a strap-on, and not in the bathroom at a casual acquaintance's party. :)

Wordwytch: Oops. Did I imply there was too much wine and the decision was made by the alcohol? I wasn't trying to. I thought saying "this wine is awful" just said Liz didn't like the crap vintage.

-- PB