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Monday, November 29, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday Challenge for 12-3-10

(Source image: "Always Remember You First" by Mick Payton)

I hope everyone who celebrates Thanksgiving had a good holiday! Your challenge for this Friday, 12-3-10, is to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 111-149 words. Here, also, is a phrase for you to use in your submission:

"...scratchy and roughened..."

As usual, nobody's checking word counts, or the key phrase, but you only cheat yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're breaking them to earn a spanking....in which case, see me after class.

The usual reminders apply: if you're planning on joining in the fun, please email me (insatiabear (AT) gmail [DOT] com) or leave a comment here, sometime before Friday. And please, for the love of all that's holy, include a website address if you email me, or if your commenting profile doesn't have a link to your page. It makes things a whole hell of a lot easier for me. You all want to do that, don't you? Right. If you don't let me know you're playing, or don't tell me where you can be found, I'll have to leave you off the list of participants when I post it on Friday. And nobody wants that.

Here's a button for you if you want to include that in your post. Use it to link back to the challenge post, if you like, or link to the Flash Fiction Friday FAQ if you'd rather do that. That Flash Fiction Friday FAQ is also the link you should visit if you're new to the whole FFF thing and have questions. I want everybody to enjoy this, after all.


Check back here on Friday for my take on the challenge and the list of participants, and then again on Monday for the next FFF challenge! And as always, if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see used in an upcoming week, send them my way.

 -- PB

Friday, November 26, 2010

Disabling anonymous comments for a while

Due to issues with spam comments lately I am temporarily disabling "anonymous" comments for a while. Anyone with a Blogger or Wordpress account, or with an OpenID, can still leave comments, and of course you can always send me messages via the email address on the sidebar.

-- PB

Friday, November 19, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 11-19-10: "Whiskey and Cigarettes"

(Image provided by Sephani Paige, original source unknown).

“Here,” Tina moaned.

“Yes, right here,” Amy returned, her mouth muffled as she rained kisses on Tina's collarbone, down her neck, opening her shirt, Tina's breasts tumbling free. Tina moaned again, spreading her legs. One arm went round her young lover's neck; the other flicked a lighter as she fumbled with trembling hand to light her cigarette.

Lower, Amy was pulling Tina's jeans down. “Oo, a present for me!” she giggled. “No underwear.” She knelt and her head went between Tina's legs. She inhaled deeply and then her mouth was there, right there, her tongue moving, spreading, Tina's wetness already coating her face. Tina shuddered, hips thrusting forward helplessly.

The stairs creaked; Tina, her senses flooded by crashing sensations, heard it as clear as a bell. “Somebody's coming,” she breathed raggedly.

“Yes,” Amy answered between licks. “And it'll be you, in a minute or two.”

Tina sighed. “Oh, God, right there. Oh, so good. Yes -- yes! Oh, don't stop.”

“I hadn't planned to,” Amy purred.

Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 150-180 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...the stairs creaked..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

The following people are participating this week. Go check out their take on this FFF, won't you, and thank 'em for playing along.

Sephani Paige:  http://sephanipaige.wordpress.com   (Sephi also provided the pic this week; thanks, Sephi!)
Gatsby:  http://thesexaddictsdiary.blogspot.com  (Gatsby is new this week; say hello and welcome!)
Soren:  http://amorousdays.blogspot.com
David:  http://dsinvegas.blogspot.com   (David's a newcomer; go say hello and welcome!)
Drench:  http://thedrenchedone.blogspot.com
Rozewolf:  http://wordwytch.wordpress.com
Dioneo:  http://eccespanko.blogspot.com
Advizor:  http://advizortoall.blogspot.com
Lexi:  http://lex-ploits.blogspot.com
Max:  http://mystic-satyr.blogspot.com
William:  http://thetrainingofmylovelyslut.blogspot.com  (late addition and newcomer)

Please note:  There will not be a FFF next week because of the U.S. Thanksgiving holiday. I'll have too many things occupying my attention that week to manage a decent posting or to make the rounds, and I'm sure the same will apply to most of you. We'll return to your regularly scheduled FFF the week after on Monday the 29th. Thanks! 

-- PB

Monday, November 15, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday Challenge for 11-19-10

(Image provided by Sephani Paige, original source unknown).


My apologies to all for missing last week. Real-life concerns intruded.

Your challenge for this Friday, 11-19-10, is to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 150-180 words. Your required phrase to use in your submission:

"...the stairs creaked..."

As usual, nobody's checking word counts, or the key phrase, but you only cheat yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're breaking them to earn a spanking....in which case, see me after class.

The usual reminders apply: if you're planning on joining in the fun, please email me (insatiabear (AT) gmail [DOT] com) or leave a comment here, sometime before Friday. And please, for the love of all that's holy, include a website address if you email me, or if your commenting profile doesn't have a link to your page. It makes things a whole hell of a lot easier for me. You all want to do that, don't you? Right. If you don't let me know you're playing, or don't tell me where you can be found, I'll have to leave you off the list of participants when I post it on Friday. And nobody wants that.

Here's a button for you if you want to include that in your post. Use it to link back to the challenge post, if you like, or link to the Flash Fiction Friday FAQ if you'd rather do that. That Flash Fiction Friday FAQ is also the link you should visit if you're new to the whole FFF thing and have questions. I want everybody to enjoy this, after all.


Check back here on Friday for my take on the challenge and the list of participants, and then again on Monday for the next FFF challenge! And as always, if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see used in an upcoming week, send them my way. Thanks to Sephani Paige for sending this week's photo.

 -- PB

Friday, November 5, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 11-5-10: "Test Drive"

(Image provided by Rozewolf, original source unknown.)

Ah! Fresh meat! he thought. No one's looking for classic cars these days, but she must really like it to climb inside like that. He headed in that direction, surreptitiously adjusting his tie.

When he reached the Pontiac, though, there was an audible “thunk” as his jaw hit the ground.

Her hands wandered lazily – over the dashboard, over her belly, along the steering wheel, along her thighs, brushing the radio knobs, brushing her own knobs, hard and standing out. He could smell her scent, cherry blossom and sandalwood, drifting from the open windows.

He cleared his throat and she looked up at him, calm as a Zen monk. Her hands were still moving, caressing the car and herself.

“Tell me,” she said, and he tasted whiskey and cigarettes in that gravelly voice, “do you have the keys?”

Dazed, he fumbled them out and tossed them to her. He felt himself growing hard as he watched her fingers slip along the cool steel shaft and slide it slowly into the ignition. The engine caught immediately, humming quietly, rife with power. He stared, heart racing, as she reached down and slipped two fingers inside. She moaned and her head rolled back. The engine thrummed throatily, vibrating all the way through to his bones.

“I'll take it,” she sighed, meeting his stare. “And then I'll take you.”



Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 130-230 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...humming quietly..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

Special Bonus Director's Commentary Track: 

I was so deluged with ideas that I spent the entire week deciding on an approach. First I imagined her at a drive-in theater with her date, wanting to surprise him when he returned to the car after going to get them food. I abandoned that one almost immediately, deciding I didn't have the word length to set it up properly (hell, who even remembers drive-in theaters nowadays?)

Next, I thought perhaps I'd write it from the perspective of a long-haul trucker who had a pleasant few minutes as he watched the lady in the next car over pleasuring herself at 55 mph. I'm sure this act gets played out very frequently, and that was why I dropped that one: it felt like it had been done to death.

Then I considered a spiteful, meaner approach: a woman who hated the car her husband spent so much loving time on, and decided to put her own stamp on it by ruining the seat with a gush or two. I wondered how he'd react, and the angry scene that would result, and decided I didn't really want to go there.

Finally I hit on the approach I liked best: she was test driving the car, and that she'd be shocking hell out of the poor bastard who was trying to sell it. How would he react? Probably like this, really: startled as hell at first, admiring her body, stunned by her poise and brazen calm. I kind of wish I'd had a bit more word length so I could go into more detail on what happened next. She's already primed and ready, and he was getting there pretty quickly just watching her. So....use your imaginations. I'm sure you can guess.

The following people are participating this week. Go check out their take on this FFF, won't you, and thank 'em for playing along.


Drenchxoxo:  http://thedrenchedone.blogspot.com 
Soren:  http://amorousdays.blogspot.com 
Rozewolf:  http://wordwytch.wordpress.com   (Rozewolf provided this week's photo as well; thanks Roze!) 
Scarlett:  http://msscarlettletter.blogspot.com 
Spring Flower:  http://agirlsgottahaveoptions.blogspot.com 
Oversexed Librarian:  http://oversexedlibrarian.blogspot.com 
Sephani Paige:  http://sephanipaige.wordpress.com 
Lexi:  http://lex-ploits.blogspot.com 
Max:  http://mystic-satyr.blogspot.com 
Advizor:  http://advizortoall.blogspot.com 
Snow:  http://snow9.wordpress.com


Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. 

-- PB

Monday, November 1, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday Challenge for 11-5-10

(Image provided by Rozewolf, original source unknown.)

Your challenge for this Friday, 11-5-10, is to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 130-230 words. Since everyone seems to be enjoying the required phrases, please use this phrase in your submission:

"...humming quietly..."

As usual, nobody's checking word counts, or the key phrase, but you only cheat yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're breaking them to earn a spanking....in which case, see me after class.

The usual reminders apply: if you're planning on joining in the fun, please email me (insatiabear (AT) gmail [DOT] com) or leave a comment here, sometime before Friday. And please, for the love of all that's holy, include a website address if you email me, or if your commenting profile doesn't have a link to your page. It makes things a whole hell of a lot easier for me. You all want to do that, don't you? Right. If you don't let me know you're playing, or don't tell me where you can be found, I'll have to leave you off the list of participants when I post it on Friday. And nobody wants that.

Here's a button for you if you want to include that in your post. Use it to link back to the challenge post, if you like, or link to the Flash Fiction Friday FAQ if you'd rather do that. That Flash Fiction Friday FAQ is also the link you should visit if you're new to the whole FFF thing and have questions. I want everybody to enjoy this, after all.


Check back here on Friday for my take on the challenge and the list of participants, and then again on Monday for the next FFF challenge! And as always, if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see used in an upcoming week, send them my way.

 -- PB