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Friday, November 19, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 11-19-10: "Whiskey and Cigarettes"

(Image provided by Sephani Paige, original source unknown).

“Here,” Tina moaned.

“Yes, right here,” Amy returned, her mouth muffled as she rained kisses on Tina's collarbone, down her neck, opening her shirt, Tina's breasts tumbling free. Tina moaned again, spreading her legs. One arm went round her young lover's neck; the other flicked a lighter as she fumbled with trembling hand to light her cigarette.

Lower, Amy was pulling Tina's jeans down. “Oo, a present for me!” she giggled. “No underwear.” She knelt and her head went between Tina's legs. She inhaled deeply and then her mouth was there, right there, her tongue moving, spreading, Tina's wetness already coating her face. Tina shuddered, hips thrusting forward helplessly.

The stairs creaked; Tina, her senses flooded by crashing sensations, heard it as clear as a bell. “Somebody's coming,” she breathed raggedly.

“Yes,” Amy answered between licks. “And it'll be you, in a minute or two.”

Tina sighed. “Oh, God, right there. Oh, so good. Yes -- yes! Oh, don't stop.”

“I hadn't planned to,” Amy purred.

Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 150-180 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...the stairs creaked..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

The following people are participating this week. Go check out their take on this FFF, won't you, and thank 'em for playing along.

Sephani Paige:  http://sephanipaige.wordpress.com   (Sephi also provided the pic this week; thanks, Sephi!)
Gatsby:  http://thesexaddictsdiary.blogspot.com  (Gatsby is new this week; say hello and welcome!)
Soren:  http://amorousdays.blogspot.com
David:  http://dsinvegas.blogspot.com   (David's a newcomer; go say hello and welcome!)
Drench:  http://thedrenchedone.blogspot.com
Rozewolf:  http://wordwytch.wordpress.com
Dioneo:  http://eccespanko.blogspot.com
Advizor:  http://advizortoall.blogspot.com
Lexi:  http://lex-ploits.blogspot.com
Max:  http://mystic-satyr.blogspot.com
William:  http://thetrainingofmylovelyslut.blogspot.com  (late addition and newcomer)

Please note:  There will not be a FFF next week because of the U.S. Thanksgiving holiday. I'll have too many things occupying my attention that week to manage a decent posting or to make the rounds, and I'm sure the same will apply to most of you. We'll return to your regularly scheduled FFF the week after on Monday the 29th. Thanks! 

-- PB

9 comments:

Drenchxoxo said...

So sexy to know that someone could be intruding on their wicked play.

Most definitely heightens the experience.

Welcome back and happy FFF!

Oversexed Librarian said...

"Somebody's coming." Maybe you should have made THAT be the required phrase this week.

TemptingSweets99 said...

Sounds like someone is in for a nice show. ;-)

Naughty Lexi said...

I don't have a favorite bit; this was just sexy all over. Glad to have you back, and thanks for taking next week off so I won't feel guilty if I can't put in the time to do it ;)

Cheeky Minx said...

Oh yes, please don't stop...

So damn sexy, PB. x

Spring Flower said...

What, a holiday? Not here in Canada! :) Yeah, sorry I missed FFF this week.

And this, PB was sexy and funny - my favorite combination! (well, one of them anyway)

Dioneo said...

Very erotic indeed, PB! I think it's cool how we looked at the photo and saw reciprocal personalities in the characters. I had the standing one be the calm alpha, but perhaps that's too obvious. I like that you had the server take the lead and keep the calm.

The Panserbjørne said...

Thank you all for the lovely comments. I'm glad you all liked the photo and my particular take on it. Thanks to Sephi for providing the photo this week!

-- PB

rozewolf said...

Very nice Panser!


(and yes, I am only just now getting around to reading everyones! what a week!)