Our clothing lay, an unheeded heap, nearby. Spray from the waterfall drifted in a fine mist across our bodies as she rode me. The water was cold, but the two of us were very, very hot.
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This is my entry for Spanky and Tiggs's second Flash Fiction Friday, using the pic shown above as an inspiration. You want to play too? Then go check out the post for inspiration!
-- PB
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10 comments:
Yessss...I can almost feel the mist, not to mention the steam. ;)
xoxo
~Luna
WOW!!!!! Mist, steam and all things watery and sexy and magical, happening in the great outdoors! Great entry!
Thanks for letting me know about it, too!
Lovely Luna: Mm. Care to create some steam with me? ;)
Tiggs: Thankye! Glad you liked it. I do love the great outdoors.
-- PB
Passionate and nicely paced. Mmmm, could just imagine it all.
Mina
Mina: I'm glad it was to your liking! I enjoyed yours as well.
-- PB
And this post was very, very hot too! This story created a strong image in my mind that I'll think about for a while. Wonderful!
Lovely, I could imagine being there.
Ronnie
xx
Spanky: Thanks again for the invite to participate. Glad you liked this one as well.
Ronnie: Excellent, that means I hit the mark. Thanks!
-- PB
Hi PB,
I'm sorry I didn't get here sooner. This is very delicately raw and real. The very definition of erotic.
KayLynn: Thanks awfully! Nice to be thought of as good enough to define the term.
-- PB
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