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Friday, March 11, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday 3-11-11: "Splish Splash"

(Source image: "Good Clean Fun" by John Hogl)

Submerged with only my nose above the water, I luxuriated in heat and silence, a vessel adrift. A small part of me wondered when my beloved might get home.

Timeless minutes later, I found out. Her small hand stole into the water and caressed my sleeping penis; it awoke to her touch, as it always does, raising its head happily.

I shuddered pleasantly and broached, scattering water everywhere. Straddling me, she settled down and onto her favorite toy. I moaned as I was enveloped in warmth and silk sleekness. Clinging to each other, we rocked to and fro softly, loving the day's stresses away.

Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 69-119 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...enveloped in warmth..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

Special Bonus Director's Commentary Track:

I consciously tried to make this week's pic and phrase more happy and upbeat, as I'd had more than enough of the negative side of things over the past few weeks. I chose something that just made me beam from ear to ear when looking at it. Look at those two, the expressions on their faces, the tenderness in their embrace. That's not just sex, that's not just fucking, that's lovemaking. If you get the distinction.

I've never been surprised in the bath like this, but over the years I've had some wonderful loving interludes that are great for scrubbing away any unpleasantries of the day (or week). I've had one of those weeks this week, actually. Sadly, though my partner is loving in many ways, I doubt it would ever enter her mind to surprise me like this. But hey, that's what fantasies are for, isn't it?

If you are playing along this week, please leave your link below. It will appear in the text of the post itself, not in the comments, so everyone that's playing will be listed here. This frees me from having to chase people down to find out if they're playing or update the Friday post several times for late entries.

In any case, the participants list is below. Go check them out, and thanks to all who played along.



Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. 

-- PB

12 comments:

Advizor54 said...

Oh crap, they are in the bathtub. Hmmmm, do I have time for a re-write? I should look at the pictures more closely...

I liked your take on it, very nice..

wordwytch said...

I did like this pic. Of course the brat in my head couldn't resist a bit of fun. Sweet fun this week though.

Loved your post. I like the idea of melting away the stress.

Naughty Lexi said...

It was all sweet, and yet I managed... no, wait, this isn't about me. I've never been surprised like that either, but then I lack several of the requisite body parts. But reading yours, I can feel just how it would feel. It sort of floated. Very pleasant.

TemptingSweets99 said...

I think this is the best way to love the "day's stresses away". Love this.

France said...

I agree... soft, loving and tender were the topic for this week! Looks like we could all use a little bit of loving (and when I mean little, I don't mean size-wise! hehe)

Love it. HFFF to you, Panser-sweet. :)

Lusting Lola said...

"loving the day's stresses away." Beautiful. Sensual. I love it. :)

The Panserbjørne said...

Advizor: Take it however you like. That's part of the fun. :) I'm glad you liked what you read here, though, after your initial "oh shit" reaction.

Rozewolf: Sweet fun is good! It's what I was hoping for from everyone this week. Glad you participated.

Lexi: I'm glad you liked it, even if you weren't quite feeling the same vibe I was hoping to engender. Like I said to Advizor, I like reading whatever reactions these pics/phrases generate in you all. And I'm glad it was able to bring you some of the warmth I was hoping for.

Sweets: I can't think of any other better way to get rid of stress than a hot bath and a hot lover and a long tender interlude like this. I'm glad you agree. Thanks!

France: The same goes back to you! I'm glad the warm happy feeling I was striving for came through so clearly here. Definitely did in yours as well.

Lola: I'm glad you did! Thanks for dropping by.

-- PB

HEDONE said...

How soothing..."loving the day's stresses away."

So many excellent stories this week.

Thank you for this.

-H

The Panserbjørne said...

HEDONE: Thanks so much! So when are you going to join in the fun, hmm? We'd love to have you....in all the ways that implies. :)

-- PB

R said...

I liked to see in your story, the man thinking about his beloved one and waiting for her, even if it was just 'a small part of him' wondering when she would be back.
I liked the sweetness and humor in it, and the image of a penis raising it's head it's quite funny...
I agree with the others, 'loving the day's stresses away' was perfection!

nilla said...

oh Panser. happy sigh.

that was *lovely*..soft and warm and delightful.

one of my favorite takes this week.

"yummmmmmy"

nilla

The Panserbjørne said...

R.: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it so much.

Nilla: Thank you too! I do like the soft warm approach now and again.

-- PB