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Friday, February 4, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday 2-4-11: "Forty-Love"

(Source image: Playboy Playmates Karissa and Kristina Shannon)


“Forty-love!” I called, as the ball bounced just out of reach. They glanced at each other, expressions unreadable. Something passed between them, unspoken.

Ready for the next serve, I tossed the ball up, ready to smash...and whiffed air. The ball bounced away, mockingly.

Karissa and Kristina were stripping. They stood there with saucy smiles, breasts bared, shirts discarded, sliding tiny skirts down to drop to the clay, a double dose of distraction.

“We propose a new game,” Kristina called. “Nude. Winner takes all.”

“Dude,” my partner said under his breath. “How often does an opportunity like this happen?”

I glanced back at the girls. “You're on,” I answered.

Three 6-0 sets later, they approached, panting, to claim their reward. “Winner takes all” had never sounded so sweet.


Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 68-134 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...a double dose..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

Special Bonus Director's Commentary Track:

I wanted something light and fun this week. Accordingly, I selected a pic which had a warm friendly feeling to it, but had endless potential for mischief (come on, just look at the expressions on their faces). You could tell these two were up to something even if they weren't nekkid.

Naked tennis would be a lot of fun, I think, but like the fellas in the story, I'd be too busy watching the lovely ladies in motion to pay any attention to the fuzzy yellow sphere. I'm sure I'd lose just as handily as they. Now the only question is, what kind of reward would the ladies want? I leave that as an exercise for the reader.

Please note that this week I am trying something different with the participants list. If you are playing along this week, please leave your link below. It will appear in the text of the post itself, not in the comments, so everyone that's playing will be listed here. This frees me from having to chase people down to find out if they're playing or update the Friday post several times for late entries. We'll see how this works out.

In any case, the participants list is below. Go check them out, and thanks to all who are joining in this week!



Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. 

-- PB

10 comments:

wordwytch said...

And now to see if this works! Loved your post. Very seductive and sweet. The balls in motion will certainly not be yellow for long. :)

Vesta said...

Oh my goodness. What brazen hussies! Indeed, opportunities like this don't come along every day.

Very imaginative. I enjoyed it.

Naughty Lexi said...

Only a man would say that naked tennis would be fun. Actually, I can see a lot of opportunities for not-fun for guys too, what with exposed anatomy and hard-hit tennis balls. But the bouncy-bouncy... please let us wear at least a sport bra until after the match concludes ;) Or let us play naked chess instead. I promise, I suck just as bad at chess as I do at tennis, and there's far more opportunity for long gazes at exposed flesh while pondering your move in chess.

Advizor54 said...

Lexi will have the same complaint on my post..... ha ha ha....but I like your take as well. Physics and Mother Nature be damned! Naked tennis is in!

The Panserbjørne said...

Roze: Yeah, I was thinking the same thing. I thought it might be fun but have actually reconsidered when I thought about the number of things that are likely to bounce around.

Vesta: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Lexi: I've actually had to reconsider from the guys' perspective; too much flopping and dangling about. Even if they do get hard from watching the ladies. But these women don't look like they're well-endowed enough to have a problem with, er, bobbling. :) Naked chess would be fun too, though. :)

Advizor: Physics be damned indeed! All for naked tennis, raise their hands! :) Glad you liked.

-- PB

Soren said...

I'm liking the new sign up! Must take a load off you. :)

~Soren

Naughty Lexi said...

Yeah, on previous discussion, I've learned that there are reasons why athletes of the masculine persuasion wear athletic supporters that have nothing to do with a hard cup protecting the easily-smitten bits. And those ladies do seem a bit under-endowed, but support is important regardless; you're never too flat to sag. Still, maybe some slow-hit tennis, with less diving into the clay for a low ball and more giggling and lobbing...

The Panserbjørne said...

Soren: Yeah, it definitely makes things much easier for me. Which is a good thing. :)

Lexi: I guess there are pros and cons to anything. You're probably right, though, it wouldn't be much fun for either. But this is my fantasy world, dammit. :)

-- PB

TemptingSweets99 said...

Now, THAT is some tennis game, huh? ;-)

France said...

Oh but PB, I used to like you chasing us!! ;) That's a very good idea regarless.

Now for the post... I liked it. A lot. It's light and fun for sure! I was not inspired at all for this one.

But I have the same comment, us women do need support, even if we have small breasts. Trust me. :)