Friday, December 4, 2009

Flash Fiction Friday: "Constriction"



He'd left in high dudgeon, slamming out the door with an angry, “Well, I can't very well fit you into my fucking suitcase, can I?” And she knew he was right; she'd just have to wait till he returned. But she dreamed....picturing the total blackness, the stabbing pains in her constricted limbs, the agony of uncertainty, the utter, grinding, crushing helplessness. And felt a delicious spear of excitement impale her at the thought.

Next time, she thought. Besides, once I pop out and get my mouth around his cock, he wouldn't be mad.

Would he?


(This is my contribution for Flash Fiction Friday, hosted this week by the always-enchanting Luna Mauvaise. Luna's directive was to write 96 words exactly on the picture shown above. If you want to play too, why not stop by her place and see her?)


-- PB
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11 comments:

  1. The TemptressDecember 4, 2009 at 9:26 AM

    Heh heh, cute. And thank you for adding a new word to my vocabulary - dudgeon.

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  2. The PanserbjørneDecember 4, 2009 at 9:28 AM

    Temptress: You're welcome! I aim to please. Well, where you're concerned, anyway. ;) Glad you liked it.

    -- PB

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  3. AnonymousDecember 4, 2009 at 10:21 AM

    I think I would fit & I'd enjoy the crushing helplessness. Where are we going? ;)

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  4. The PanserbjørneDecember 4, 2009 at 10:50 AM

    Spring Flower: She apparently would enjoy it too! You're in good company.

    Where are we going? Anywhere you like, luv. ;)

    -- PB

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  5. Fantasia LillithDecember 4, 2009 at 12:13 PM

    Well I JUST got back from vacation and ... this was perfect!

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  6. Luna MauvaiseDecember 4, 2009 at 6:12 PM

    I love it! It is a nice alternate take on mine I think.

    Many thanks for kicking in this week!

    xoxo
    ~Luna

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  7. The PanserbjørneDecember 5, 2009 at 4:21 PM

    Fantasia: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Welcome back! We missed you. :)

    Luna: Thanks so much; I'm always happy when my writings please you. And thanks for hosting this week!

    -- PB

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  8. Fantasia LillithDecember 6, 2009 at 9:39 AM

    Did you now ... miss me? bet you say that to all the ladies!

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  9. The PanserbjørneDecember 7, 2009 at 8:03 AM

    Fantasia: I said WE missed you. You have many fans, you know. :)

    -- PB

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  10. nillaDecember 7, 2009 at 2:25 PM

    *sounds of clapping* oh, well done! and I too love the use of the word dudgeon...not used often enough these days and so evocative of high hot emotion...nice scene setting Panser! Love it...happy FFF!

    hug,

    nilla

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  11. The PanserbjørneDecember 7, 2009 at 3:53 PM

    Nilla: I do like to use infrequently-used words and phrases sometimes. Just call me the obscure lexicographer. :) Glad you liked it!

    -- PB

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-- PB