Friday, December 18, 2009

Flash Fiction Friday #17: Vanishing Point


She'd never been nude in a car before, and certainly not while driving. But protesting got her nowhere, not when he told her to stand up and display herself, and certainly not when the darkness came down over her vision. She shrieked, but his steadying arms were immediately around her, one on the wheel, the other on her flank.

“Let go,” he whispered, words barely audible over the roar of windblast, and with a shuddering sigh she did just that. Excitement stirred between her thighs as they boomed down the road into the great unknown.


(Flash Fiction Friday is normally hosted by Spanky but he's taking some time off from blogging, so the always-enchanting Luna Mauvaise has provided this week's photo and word length requirement: 69 words on the photo shown above. Luna would no doubt be pleased to know this is the first time I've broken the rules, and the word length requirement, choosing instead to reverse it and go with 96 words. Go visit her to see who else is playing!)
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19 comments:

  1. Cala GrayDecember 18, 2009 at 9:17 AM

    Ooo now that is something I need to try, excellent post.:)

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  2. The PanserbjørneDecember 18, 2009 at 9:31 AM

    Gray: You'd better really trust the guy, then! I'm not sure *I* trust anyone enough to let them blindfold me while I'm driving. :) Glad you liked this one, though.

    -- PB

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  3. Luna MauvaiseDecember 18, 2009 at 9:33 AM

    You are a naughty, naughty boy PB! I love it.

    Thanks for playing!

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  4. The PanserbjørneDecember 18, 2009 at 9:35 AM

    Luna: Heh. I figured you would be amused. I enjoyed your contribution too, which I forgot to mention earlier when telling you about this entry. Sorry about that!

    -- PB

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  5. AnonymousDecember 18, 2009 at 11:50 AM

    Oh damn, this is kinda hot! For me, anything dangerous is hot ;-)

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  6. The PanserbjørneDecember 18, 2009 at 11:51 AM

    Spring Flower: Yeah, I kinda got that impression from you. Want to go for a run with the top down....and your top down? :)

    -- PB

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  7. AnonymousDecember 18, 2009 at 3:30 PM

    I love all the sensations... Very nice!

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  8. The PanserbjørneDecember 18, 2009 at 3:36 PM

    KayLynn: Glad you liked it! Thanks for dropping by.

    -- PB

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  9. Cheeky MinxDecember 18, 2009 at 4:07 PM

    Oh, yum! Domination and exhibitionism in 96 words - bravo PB...

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  10. The PanserbjørneDecember 18, 2009 at 4:36 PM

    Minx: I normally stick very closely to the "pure" word requirements but this one just wouldn't do in 69 words. So I pushed it a a bit. I'm glad you enjoyed this one!

    -- PB

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  11. AnonymousDecember 19, 2009 at 9:23 AM

    I have to admit, I like the danger aspect. With the right person, could be unforgettable. :-)

    CW

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  12. The PanserbjørneDecember 20, 2009 at 11:01 AM

    CW: Aren't you lucky that you've got the right person, then? :) I wonder if your Surfer would go for this sort of thing. Guess you can always ask him and find out. Thanks for dropping in!

    -- PB

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  13. Fantasia LillithDecember 21, 2009 at 6:17 AM

    It's like ... that cheesy scene from titanic but WAY better!! Nice!

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  14. Fantasia LillithDecember 21, 2009 at 7:29 AM

    oh ... and I hope you'll come and play on pillow talk!

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  15. The PanserbjørneDecember 21, 2009 at 9:25 AM

    Fantasia: Glad you liked it! And yes, I'll be sure to provide my own take on the Solstice thing; it sounds interesting. Already turning over some ideas.

    -- PB

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  16. KatiaDecember 23, 2009 at 11:12 AM

    Love danager and excitement of the unknown. Great story!
    Katia

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  17. The PanserbjørneDecember 23, 2009 at 11:55 AM

    Katia: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! Drop by anytime.

    -- PB

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  18. Fantasia LillithDecember 24, 2009 at 7:25 PM

    I do love how you write my friend ...

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  19. The PanserbjørneDecember 24, 2009 at 9:36 PM

    Fantasia: Thanks! I'm glad it was to your liking...and I'm happy you usually do like what I provide. :)

    -- PB

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Thanks for chiming in! I will always read and respond to comments here; if you don't feel like using the "email responses" link, feel free to check back for my replies!
-- PB