Friday, September 4, 2009

Flash Fiction Friday: Looking Glass Falls

 
Our faces were only inches apart, our bodies pressed much closer. She clung tightly, hung and impaled on me as I stood waist-deep in the water, my feet well braced. Her arms were wrapped around my neck and her legs around my waist. My hands were on her ass, clenched tight, lifting and dropping her, each downstroke making wet smacking sounds.

Our clothing lay, an unheeded heap, nearby. Spray from the waterfall drifted in a fine mist across our bodies as she rode me. The water was cold, but the two of us were very, very hot.

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This is my entry for Spanky and Tiggs's second Flash Fiction Friday, using the pic shown above as an inspiration. You want to play too? Then go check out the post for inspiration!

-- PB
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10 comments:

  1. Luna MauvaiseSeptember 4, 2009 at 8:42 AM

    Yessss...I can almost feel the mist, not to mention the steam. ;)

    xoxo
    ~Luna

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  2. TiggsSeptember 4, 2009 at 8:58 AM

    WOW!!!!! Mist, steam and all things watery and sexy and magical, happening in the great outdoors! Great entry!

    Thanks for letting me know about it, too!

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  3. The PanserbjørneSeptember 4, 2009 at 9:02 AM

    Lovely Luna: Mm. Care to create some steam with me? ;)

    Tiggs: Thankye! Glad you liked it. I do love the great outdoors.

    -- PB

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  4. MinaSeptember 4, 2009 at 11:03 AM

    Passionate and nicely paced. Mmmm, could just imagine it all.

    Mina

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  5. The PanserbjørneSeptember 4, 2009 at 11:07 AM

    Mina: I'm glad it was to your liking! I enjoyed yours as well.

    -- PB

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  6. SpankySeptember 5, 2009 at 5:09 AM

    And this post was very, very hot too! This story created a strong image in my mind that I'll think about for a while. Wonderful!

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  7. ronnieSeptember 5, 2009 at 10:11 AM

    Lovely, I could imagine being there.

    Ronnie
    xx

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  8. The PanserbjørneSeptember 5, 2009 at 5:23 PM

    Spanky: Thanks again for the invite to participate. Glad you liked this one as well.

    Ronnie: Excellent, that means I hit the mark. Thanks!

    -- PB

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2009 at 3:23 AM

    Hi PB,

    I'm sorry I didn't get here sooner. This is very delicately raw and real. The very definition of erotic.

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  10. The PanserbjørneSeptember 7, 2009 at 6:04 PM

    KayLynn: Thanks awfully! Nice to be thought of as good enough to define the term.

    -- PB

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Thanks for chiming in! I will always read and respond to comments here; if you don't feel like using the "email responses" link, feel free to check back for my replies!
-- PB