tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post8645882275636879582..comments2023-09-01T04:35:15.169-05:00Comments on Insatiabear: A Panserbjørne's Musings: Flash Fiction Friday 4-15-11: "Shadows and Light"The Panserbjørnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10643891392421573706noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-4798002981355024142011-04-17T13:38:07.920-05:002011-04-17T13:38:07.920-05:00It is a good piece, as always with you. I hope tho...It is a good piece, as always with you. I hope those down moments will pass soon though.Francehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13015208689942511974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-75197515011292694112011-04-15T18:56:50.552-05:002011-04-15T18:56:50.552-05:00A bitter sweet story, but well written.A bitter sweet story, but well written.Katiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08323726599440849176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-14682595281436139512011-04-15T15:02:03.465-05:002011-04-15T15:02:03.465-05:00that was painfully sweet in just the right portion...that was painfully sweet in just the right portions...yet still left me wondering if it was really too late or not. Happy FFF :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-25071233160945167272011-04-15T09:08:20.550-05:002011-04-15T09:08:20.550-05:00Sweet melancholy indeed. oh my...
Hope you get th...Sweet melancholy indeed. oh my...<br /><br />Hope you get through your funk soon. This is such an odd time of year, sun and warmth one day, cold and dreary the next.Wordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05861881684903931429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-50859264351745574852011-04-15T07:38:33.969-05:002011-04-15T07:38:33.969-05:00I think the last line may be one of the best last ...I think the last line may be one of the best last lines you've ever written, and I'm sorry that it comes out of something so unpleasant as deepening depression. I for one will accept less quality next week if in exchange you feel better :)Naughty Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11273411739011393369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-32241956663074682902011-04-15T07:20:10.224-05:002011-04-15T07:20:10.224-05:00soft, sweet and sour...
Your interpretation is ver...soft, sweet and sour...<br />Your interpretation is very different from mine but I like itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-84989517021414132602011-04-15T02:26:14.888-05:002011-04-15T02:26:14.888-05:00That one last time fuck is usually not a good idea...That one last time fuck is usually not a good idea in my book.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-38479562162423735882011-04-15T01:40:03.439-05:002011-04-15T01:40:03.439-05:00I'm not a fan of the "one more time"...I'm not a fan of the "one more time" pitch, it rarely turns out well and, well, in the sitcoms she always ends up pregnant as a cliffhanger.<br /><br />I hope your mood lifts soon. Meloncholy and darkness is fine for 160 words, but in real life, it's no fun at all.Advizor54https://www.blogger.com/profile/02818587592229617693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-13697298562647995162011-04-15T01:17:11.145-05:002011-04-15T01:17:11.145-05:00i'm glad they at least had that farewell fuck....i'm glad they at least had that farewell fuck. powerful story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-70718020639409253712011-04-15T00:11:58.409-05:002011-04-15T00:11:58.409-05:00Darkness, sadness, melancholic, interesting all of...Darkness, sadness, melancholic, interesting all of the interpretations of that look on her face. Well Done.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04943867226010869367noreply@blogger.com