tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post8445216073847715362..comments2023-09-01T04:35:15.169-05:00Comments on Insatiabear: A Panserbjørne's Musings: Flash Fiction Friday 2-18-11: "...And When She Falleth"The Panserbjørnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10643891392421573706noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-87164551147579386242011-02-21T16:04:00.219-06:002011-02-21T16:04:00.219-06:00I felt like you could see inside some of my memori...I felt like you could see inside some of my memories with this one. That's just exactly how it can feel -- like a free fall. And then after... just needing to be held so that you don't float away from the intensity of it all.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-29048778056027346212011-02-18T14:11:20.257-06:002011-02-18T14:11:20.257-06:00Whoa! That was magnificent Panser!!!! Beautiful pl...Whoa! That was magnificent Panser!!!! Beautiful play.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-84329203775252125232011-02-18T12:07:31.092-06:002011-02-18T12:07:31.092-06:00I am exceedingly glad you went this way, because b...I am exceedingly glad you went this way, because between me and Advizor it seemed like enough darkness, thank you kindly. The metaphor just screams out to be used, and you used it like nobody else. The imagery of the first paragraph is just gorgeous.Naughty Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11273411739011393369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-44285738342684072672011-02-18T10:39:08.807-06:002011-02-18T10:39:08.807-06:00loved this interpretation. loved the ending, espec...loved this interpretation. loved the ending, especially. i echo david. bravo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-31509293196434110462011-02-18T09:56:06.397-06:002011-02-18T09:56:06.397-06:00Great take, PB. I've noted that many of us int...Great take, PB. I've noted that many of us interpret the images you share in a very direct, concrete manner in our FFF submissions. This one lends itself nicely to a more metaphorical take. Well done. I especially like the way you make the violence of her metaphorical fall melt into a tender post-coital denouement.Over&Outhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01627668654006196367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-4948656225683010122011-02-18T08:36:48.511-06:002011-02-18T08:36:48.511-06:00Excellent interpretation of the image, very well d...Excellent interpretation of the image, very well done!! Bravo!Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04943867226010869367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-53897156506660577532011-02-18T08:13:57.571-06:002011-02-18T08:13:57.571-06:00Letting go, surrendering to the moment often feels...Letting go, surrendering to the moment often feels like a free fall. It's an amazing feeling though! <br /><br />Loved your FFF very much, PB.Francehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13015208689942511974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-10167908596380440882011-02-18T07:03:41.826-06:002011-02-18T07:03:41.826-06:00That inability to let go holds many of us back fro...That inability to let go holds many of us back from really enjoying not just sex, but life itself. W are always holding something back and it deadens us to what should really feel. <br /><br />And thanks to Lexi for a great picture.Advizor54https://www.blogger.com/profile/02818587592229617693noreply@blogger.com