tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post5650052821744122170..comments2023-09-01T04:35:15.169-05:00Comments on Insatiabear: A Panserbjørne's Musings: Flash Fiction Friday 5-27-11: "Eye of the Beholder"The Panserbjørnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10643891392421573706noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-16925303799920638802011-05-31T08:06:33.206-05:002011-05-31T08:06:33.206-05:00Lexi: Surrendering to the sensations, perhaps. Not...Lexi: Surrendering to the sensations, perhaps. Nothing too unpleasant; I have next to no interest in that sort of thing (but then, you knew that already).<br /><br />Sweets: Thankee kindly! I'm glad you did care for it, even if I didn't. :)<br /><br />-- PBThe Panserbjørnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10643891392421573706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-21081347664083122102011-05-27T04:51:41.983-05:002011-05-27T04:51:41.983-05:00Be happy! Great job! I think you captured the sc...Be happy! Great job! I think you captured the scene very well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7689622098160989072.post-34214076667085899852011-05-27T00:06:37.441-05:002011-05-27T00:06:37.441-05:00Don't beat yourself up too much; I think it...Don't beat yourself up too much; I think it's fine. I particularly like the hand between the legs coming away wet; it's a good way of showing rather than telling. Although I'm unsure as to what she's surrendering to, I hope it's not something too unpleasant.Naughty Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11273411739011393369noreply@blogger.com