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Friday, August 6, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 8-6-10: "Uprising"

She began slowly, stroking lightly, hands running from breasts to thighs to stomach and back before slipping between her legs. Her pulse fluttered at her throat, steadily rising.

The wetness spread, engulfed her index finger; it slipped deep with another gush. She moaned. Spreading washes of delight danced along her nerve endings, inflaming, not cooling, the heat level rising as well.

Deeper now she stroked, curling her finger up and in, pressing against her front wall, unerringly finding the target: G marks the spot. She gasped louder and began to lift her hips to meet the invading finger.

Now her hand moved in slow circles as she fingered herself, brushing almost accidentally against her clit. Tiny electric shocks went through her at each contact. The voltage rose with each new stroke.

Soon the current was pulsing steadily through her as she fucked herself. The intensity grew with the tempo. Her hips rose higher. She was moaning steadily, helplessly, almost afraid of the coming wave, powerless to stop. Her head tilted, she arched her back, rising, rising, rising, coming, screaming, exploding, drifting, floating, crashing to earth.

She felt reborn.

Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 134-184 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...drifting, floating, crashing to earth..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

The following people are participating this week. Go check out their take on this FFF, won't you, and thank 'em for playing along.

Sephani Paige:
R.:  (R. is new this week; go say welcome!)
Dioneo:  (Dioneo is also new to the group; go say hi as well!)
Advizor:  (last-minute addition)
Discreteinaz:  (another last-minute addition)
Rozewolf:  (another last-minute addition)
Puss:  (still another after-the-fact addition)

Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. 

-- PB


Naughty Lexi said...

I'll have what she's having. Teehee.

For someone who's never had the opportunity to insert fingers into his own vagina, you have quite the knack for knowing how it feels. I particularly liked "spreading washes of delight." Not your everyday wank, but then it shouldn't be, should it? Rebirth through orgasm; almost religious. Flash Fiction Sunday?

Mistress Bella said...

This is very steamy, you certainly have a tasty way with words :)

Soren said...

Really enjoyed this take, PB. Thought about going with that direction, but I decided I couldn't do it justice. Looking back, I'm glad I didn't since my prose would have been so easily outshone by yours :P

Happy FFF!


Transylvanian Miss said...

*coughs and wriggles on the chair* I may have to attend to some rather pressing matters now thanks to this... Brilliant and inspiring ;)

Anonymous said...

"G marks the spot." Love it! ;-)


The Panserbjørne said...

Lexi: I do like to think that I'm pretty good at getting inside a woman's head, sometimes to know what she's thinking, sometimes to know what pleases her most...and sometimes, to guess how she pleases herself. Glad you liked. Thanks!

Bella: I try very hard! Thanks for saying so.

Soren: Man, you are much too hard on yourself. You're talented as hell too. But thanks for the praise all the same! Good for my ego. :)

Bilinda: I couldn't ask for a better compliment than THAT. Delighted to hear it...and to think about it. *leer*

Puss: It does indeed mark the spot for some lucky women. Seems to vary, though. I wonder...are you one of those?

-- PB

Curvaceous Dee said...

That was really hot - and extremely well described!

xx Dee