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Friday, July 2, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 7-2-10: "Exploration"

“Go on,” Sara said, affecting calm, though she was trembling like a leaf in a windstorm.

Vanessa bent closer, her lips parted, pulse pounding, head spinning. She couldn't believe how frightened she was, or how turned on. The combination was weirdly disconcerting. Her stomach did a slow roll and her heart followed suit. Her breath caught in her throat.

“Please...” Sara whimpered. All the sensations in her body seemed focused on her left breast, taut with wanting, the nipple diamond-hard. She was barely aware that she was sitting in a puddle.

Vanessa leaned further just a little more, and then stopped, an inch away from engulfing what she wanted so badly.

“You're sure?”

“God, I've never been more sure of anything in my life! Yes, yes, yes! I'm on fire here!”

And Vanessa closed the last infinitesimal distance, and closed her mouth over Sara's nipple, and closed the circuit, and Sara closed her eyes as a raging storm swept over her and carried her away.

Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 72-172 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase to use -- "...her breath caught in her throat...". Nobody's checking word counts, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

The following people are participating this week. Why not go check out their take on this FFF?

Spring Flower:
Red:    (Red is new this week; go say hi and welcome!)
Rozewolf:  (Ditto -- say hi and welcome to Rozewolf, joining us for the first time).
and two last-minute additions: 
Diable Incarne:

Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! The photo was thoughtfully provided by Luna Mauvaise. I will be out of town that week so will not be around to collect names for Friday's post, but the post on Monday the 12th will have a list of everyone who played along on Friday the 9th. So please make sure you let me know. :)

-- PB


Naughty Lexi said...

Ah, sitting in a puddle, the greatest of life's pleasures. Except for what makes the puddle in the first place, of course.

The Panserbjørne said...

Lexi: How very true! At least, I presume it is, not being possessed of the equipment to generate such a puddle. :)

-- PB

Gray said...

Oh my goodness that was really sexy. PB you always know the exact words to elicit quite a reaction.

lila said...

I've got to agree with Gray here. DAMN that was sexy! You have such a way with words.

The Panserbjørne said...

Gray: Thank you! It's nice of you to say so. :)

Lila: Thank you too! Coming from somebody who's got a way with words herself, that's nice to hear.

-- PB

netsfan_44 said...

Yours would go well with mine ... very nice !!

Anonymous said...

I like that. Sweet, simple, sexy.

Happy FFF and enjoy your vacation!! :)

Cheeky Minx said...

Oh my... (gulp)

Your words have once again reduced me into something of a puddle, PB. ;)

ConTemplate said...

on fire here, too!

Curvaceous Dee said...

*wriggles in her seat* That was hot!

xx Dee

The Panserbjørne said...

Netsfan: Thanks for saying so!

Spring Flower: Hey, I aim to please.

Minx: Puddles are good! But then, you know that. :)

ConTemplate: That's good to hear! Thanks.

Dee: Thanks for passing that on! I appreciate it.

-- PB