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Friday, July 16, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 7-16-10: "Gourmet/Gourmand"

(NOTE: If you're here for the Group Post, no worries...it's just below this entry. Thanks!)



Cassandra lay quietly, relishing the sensations. Melody's tongue worked in slow spirals, swirling the chocolate syrup poured over her stomach into intricate patterns, hinting at something grand and complex, a feast for the senses.

Cassandra took a shuddering breath. “So,” she breathed, “are you a gourmet or gourmand?”

Melody paused in her delicate slurping. “Gourmet, definitely... but sometimes I do like plenty to eat.”

Cassandra moaned.


Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of precisely 69 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:

"...a feast for the senses..."

Nobody's checking word counts, or for the key phrase, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).


The following people let me know they were participating this week. Go check out their take on this FFF, won't you, and thank 'em for playing along. 

Advizor:  http://advizortoall.blogspot.com 
Cara:  http://bigakboy.wordpress.com 
Katia:  http://katiaswritings.blogspot.com 
Spring Flower:  http://agirlsgottahaveoptions.blogspot.com 
heelsnstocking:  http://heelsnstocking.blogspot.com 
Chocolate Puss:  http://chocolatepuss.tumblr.com 
Lexi:  http://lex-ploits.blogspot.com 
Max:  http://mystic-satyr.blogspot.com 
Red:  http://red-tangerine.blogspot.com 
Cate:  http://categoesdown.com
B.:  http://fantasiesofanunofficialconcubine.blogspot.com  (B. is new this week, at least since I've been hosting; go welcome her!) 
Luna Mauvaise:  http://lunamauvaise.blogspot.com 
Diable Incarne:  http://conningdevil.blogspot.com
Sephani Paige:  http://sephanipaige.wordpress.com
Dee:  http://curvaceousdee.com
Slow Burn:  http://burnslowly-slowburn.blogspot.com

Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see in a future challenge, please send them my way. Next week's photo, for example, has been provided by Sephani Paige.

-- PB

9 comments:

Chocolate Puss said...

Love it! Love the question AND the answer. This is a real good one. ;-)

The Panserbjørne said...

Puss: I kinda figured this week's photo would be down your alley, so I'm happy to hear you liked this rendering. Thanks!

-- PB

Spring Flower said...

Je suis plutôt gourmande. ;-)

Slurping and licking chocolate... what can be better? I love FFF this week. :)

Naughty Lexi said...

Why can't one be both, I ask you? A little of a good thing is fine, but a lot... yeah, that's where I wanna be. But then no one ever accused me of having much self-control.

Transylvanian Miss said...

Wicked lovely PB :)
always,
Bilinda

southerngirl said...

feast for the senses??? Uhhh...hell yeah!

xx

The Panserbjørne said...

Spring Flower: Glad to hear it! I enjoyed your own contribution very much.

Lexi: Good point...but then, the women in this story seemed to be a little of both themselves, didn't they?

Bilinda: A nice phrasing to say you enjoyed it...thanks!

Southerngirl: I take it you enjoyed this as well. Thanks for saying so!

-- PB

slowburn said...

Thanks for including my entry.

The Panserbjørne said...

SB: No problem! Glad to have you with us.

-- PB