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Friday, May 28, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 5-28-10: "Rituals"

“I'm sorry, luv,” Angelina said. “I just feel ridiculous.”

Chiconahui turned to her. “Please? Just for me? This one time?”

“I know you were named after the goddess of fertility, but we really don't have to take it this far,” Angie groused.

Chiconahui stepped closer, body shining with oil, her breasts swaying liquidly. “Then you leave me no choice.”

She stretched out a hand and touched Angie's cheek, and Angie stiffened. Images blazed through her brain, images of blood and pain, of sacrifice and flame, of magnificence beyond compare. She whimpered.

“Now get down and worship Me,” Chiconahui whispered.

Angie knelt, her cunt drenched, her mouth watering. “Yes, my Goddess,” she answered, and began to do as she was bidden.

Your challenge for today was to use the artwork above and write a flash fiction of 122-128 words. Nobody's checking word counts, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

Here's the cast for this week, in order of appearance. Why not go check out their take on this FFF?

Luna Mauvaise:
Diable Incarne:
Sephani Paige: 

Check back here on Monday for the next challenge! And if you have any photos or artwork you'd like to see used in a future challenge, well, send them my way. 

-- PB


Max said...

I love it. Great writing, and very hot.

Happy FFF.

Topaz said...

It goes from intimate to dom/sub in a flash. I love it.

Anonymous said...

Awesome!! I also love the tenderness and the fast switch to a more dominating side of it.

Anonymous said...

named after indeed ;) was she in Goddess Witness Protection?? I've heard of such things....

Naughty Lexi said...

I got a very clear image of the end, and not because of the picture. Encounters with the divine...

Not My Original Vows said...

Domination through nasty imagery...interesting!


The Panserbjørne said...

Max: Thanks! I'm glad you thought so. Happy belated FFF to you as well.

Topaz, Spring Flower: Goddesses can be fickle like that. :) Glad you both liked it!

Sephani: Ohhhhh, I don't think she needs any protection, do you?

Lexi: Excellent. If the picture's that clear then I'm reaching my goals. Thanks!

Katia: She's a cruel mistress, that Chiconahui. :)

-- PB

Anonymous said...

Only ou sir could come up with Mistress Chiconahui.... great as always.


The Panserbjørne said...

Southerngirl: Oh, I don't know, several of the other participants came up with something similar. But thank you!

-- PB