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Friday, May 14, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday 5-14-10: "The Naked Detective"

"Get those jeans off," she ordered. Obediently, he slid denim down to his ankles till he swung free before her gaze.

“Oh dear,” she sighed. “This is....not what I'd hoped for.” She reached into the depths of her bag and withdrew a magnifying glass. He flushed, crimson with shame. She leaned close and began her examination, scrutinizing closely. The intensity of her gaze, the warmth of her breath – he felt himself starting to react.

Her eyes widened as the object of her attentions shifted and changed. She watched avidly as cavernous chambers filled and tissues expanded. With every second he grew heavier, longer, stronger.

“I do love men who are 'growers',” she moaned softly.

Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 60-120 words. Nobody's checking word counts, but you're only cheating yourself if you break the rules. Unless you're doing it to earn a spanking (in which case, see me after class).

The following people are participating this week. Why not go check out their take on this FFF?

Sephani Paige: 
Naughty Lexi:  (Lexi is new to FFF this week; go say hello and welcome!) 
Cate:   (Cate's journal is new and she's jumping into FFF as well; go welcome her to the ranks!) 
Curvaceous Dee:
and, getting their entries in just in time:
Luna Mauvaise:
Diable Incarne:

Check back here on Monday for the next challenge!

-- PB


Anonymous said...

Sexy!!! I love growers too. ;)

The Panserbjørne said...

Spring Flower: Thanks! I take it you speak from experience, then. :) Happy Friday!

-- PB

Gray said...

How sexy!! Love it. Happy Flash Fiction Friday to you!

lila said...

very hot!! happy FFF :)

Anonymous said...

We girls do like the expansive man. :)

Naughty Lexi said...

Aw, that's so mean. Refined ladies don't pull out the magnifying glass until they've at least tried more hands-on methods of empirical data-gathering ;)

Luna Mauvaise said...

At least she found what she was looking for.

Happy FFF, PB!

Cheeky Minx said...

Mmmm, I do so love a man who doesn't buckle under pressure and, um, rises to the occasion... ;)

Just A. Girl said...

I've never heard the term "grower" before, but I like it, I like it!

Not My Original Vows said...

Impressed...growth under pressure.
Great piece PB...Happy FFF!


The Panserbjørne said...

Gray: Thanks! I'm glad it was to your taste. Happy FFF to you as well.

Lila: I thank you! Enjoyed yours quite a bit as well.

Southerngirl: Of course you do. The more the merrier, I understand. :)

Lexi: Yeah, but who ever said that she was a refined lady? :)

Luna: Indeed...or it found her, perhaps. Happy FFF to you also!

Minx: I don't know many guys who would rise to the occasion in the face of withering scorn, but hey, I'm telling the story here, so why not? :)

Just A Girl: There are two types of guys, apparently: "growers", who change size a lot when they get hard, and "showers", who show a lot when they're soft but don't change much when they get hard. Which do you prefer? :)

Katia: Yeah, it may have been a bit unlikely but I'm telling the story here, so I can say it happened like that. :)

-- PB

Curvaceous Dee said...

Very hot. And once again I really like your word choices.

xx Dee